Lake of Penance

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From the mountaintop

They cast me

At the bottom

Left for dead

I was wounded

I was bleeding

Inner heart

Filled deep with dread

In the Lake of Penance

Drowning

Gasping

Panic through my head

Slowly touching bottom

Perhaps

My time had finally come

Slowly losing feeling

Everything

Becoming numb

A spark from deep within me

Call it ego

Call it pride

It stoked a fire

Raging

Burning

Inferno from inside

As I neared the breaking surface

Within, I felt it

Beating fast

My heart

It whispered to me

“You have now begun at last”

As I reached the shore

I stared up

In my eyes a light divine

The mount from which you cast me

I’ve returned to claim what’s mine

ยฉThe Beginning At Last


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26 responses to “Lake of Penance”

  1. Thereโ€™s a mirror here somewhere ๐Ÿ˜‰
    Fantastic writing as usual, Kevin ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
    Definitely felt this one. Youโ€™re on the way back up! ๐Ÿ™

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    1. Thank you, Laura. We’ll see if this stop lasts a bit longer than the previous, or if it’s just another step. ๐Ÿ˜„

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      1. Iโ€™m sure it will be great ๐Ÿ˜Œ youโ€™ll just need some adjusting to at first

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      2. Adjustment indeed. ๐Ÿ™„
        Sick of paperwork.

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      3. I feel you!
        Me too! Blah ๐Ÿ˜’

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      4. And you’ve got double what I have lol

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      5. Yes, luckily itโ€™s all pretty similar and Iโ€™m not at the big man on campus level like you lol ๐Ÿคช

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      6. My resume in two words: Corporate lackey. ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„

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      7. It might be better than โ€œglorified customer serviceโ€ because thatโ€™s what I told I was at one point lol ๐Ÿ˜†

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      8. That’s an interesting take on your profession to put it mildly. lol

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    1. ๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿ’ช

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    Stephanie

    Wow!! Excellent writing here. Personal and powerful.

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    1. Thank you, Stephanie. Very glad you enjoyed it. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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    1. Indeed! ๐Ÿ’ช

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  3. powerful, Chief…๐Ÿค๐Ÿ™

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    1. Thank you, Lady Destiny. Very glad you enjoyed it. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

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  4. This is amazing, Kevin! I really love your description of what is happening, plus the character’s determination. I wish I could watch this because it would make a great movie!

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    1. Thank you, Kymber! Perhaps one day? lol

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      1. That would be great!

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      2. I need to get an agent! ๐Ÿ˜„

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      3. LMAO! ๐Ÿ˜‚

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  5. […] In The Desert A Silent Yearning Solace In The Strings This I’ll Defend Lake of Penance […]

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    1. ๐Ÿค˜

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