Nine Circles

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I’ve undertaken a journey

Through the circles of Hell

My guide is named Dante

Seems to know them quite well

Said he’s been here before

And he’s seen one and all

Seems he once had arisen

After taking a fall

There’s a sign up ahead

Says your hope, leave it here

My throat feels so tight

I am choked by my fear

We descend ever further

Every level we passed

A parade so obscene

Each one worse than the last

As we got to the center

It was frigid and bare

All except for The Devil

God had frozen him there

As he gnawed on The Traitor

My eyes could watch no more

I feel down to my knees

On the hard, frigid floor

I looked up at my guide

To take leave of this place

What I saw here today

Ever etched on my face

Β©The Beginning At Last

Based on Inferno by Dante Alighieri


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29 responses to “Nine Circles”

  1. Talk about a traumatic experience πŸ˜†

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    1. I’m sure it wasn’t exactly a pleasure cruise πŸ€·β€β™‚οΈ

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      1. Hahaha πŸ˜‚ 🀣 well, let’s hope all our trips through other dimensions aren’t quite as ummm…intense? Intense in a bad way, anyways lol

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      2. Indeed! Let’s hope not! πŸ˜„

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  2. I can only imagine what everyone will be writing for Halloween.

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    1. Love poems, more than likely. Just to be contrarian πŸ˜„

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      1. Hahaha. Could be right, Mr. Kevin. Valentines Day in October.

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      2. And Easter poems at Christmas. πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

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  3. Damn, that is an intense write!

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    1. Thank you very much, Kimber. πŸ™

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  4. A very thoughtful trip, intense and vivid.

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    1. Thank you, E-Dawg. I somewhat enjoyed writing this one.

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      1. A fantastic trip.

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      2. πŸ™πŸ™

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  5. Nice idea to Dante. πŸ‘

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    1. Thank you KC. Went a bit different direction than I originally planned

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  6. Wow !
    This is brilliant !

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    1. Thank you, Maggie. It went a slightly different direction then I originally thought. πŸ™

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      1. My pleasure!
        It is an awesome write Kevin πŸ™

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      2. Thank you again. Greatly appreciated. 😊

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  7. intense comes to mind… well inspired and expressed too, Chief…

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    1. Thank you very much, Destiny. I hope I didn’t insult the original author too greatly LOL

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      1. I doubt it lol…your work stands as a stand alone too, Kevin

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      2. Hopefully in a good way πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

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      3. for sure…

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  8. Wow! Tightly written…a sobering, intense journey distilled into a few lines. Well done πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘

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    1. Thank you very much, Darryl. I wasn’t sure how well it would come out, tbh. πŸ™

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