The Kovalenko Chronicles (pt. 3)

So, since I did a pt. 2, I figured I might as well keep going with a pt. 3 and so on, and try to make something of this thing.

For those who have enjoyed the story thus far, I express my deepest appreciation. I will do my best to give you something worth reading, but please keep your expectations low, as this is still very new territory to me.

Here are links to the first and second parts of the story. When I have time, I will try to get them all in one cohesive post.

Part 1

Part 2

Nothing Ever Goes As Planned

Emil grabbed Eva tight around the arm and shoved his pistol hard into the small of her back. Against her will, she let out a small grunt of pain. She was furious with herself for letting the bastard know that it hurt.

“My car is downstairs. I would be honored if you would join me for the remainder of the evening,” Emil whispered in her ear. “And please don’t think of doing anything foolish, Eva. Stay quiet and talk to no one.” He shoved the pistol even harder into her back for emphasis.

“Open the door. Slowly,” Emil instructed her. Eva did as she was told, and they exited the cloak room, keeping a smooth, steady pace the entire length of the opulent hallway.

As they reached the stairs which led to the main gala, Emil stopped short. “Remember, Eva, speak to no one. This is no time for games.”

Eva had no plans to resist. She was currently at a severe disadvantage, and truthfully, she did not want to resist. She still had a mission to carry out and did not want Vasilev slipping through her fingers. Playing the compliant captive was the best hand she had for the moment.

They arrived at Emil’s car where his driver, a sheer mountain of a man, was waiting patiently. As he opened the rear door, Emil shoved Eva into the back seat, and climbed in the vehicle behind her. He nodded to the driver and in moments, they were on the road and headed for a destination unknown to Eva.

The ride took place in complete silence.

Emil didn’t say a word to Eva or his driver. In fact, he didn’t even look at Eva except for a quick, casual glance from time to time. Clearly, the thought that she may attempt something was of no concern to him.

For her part, Eva kept her eyes locked on Vasilev the entire time. She wanted to claw his eyes out right then and there just to hear him scream in agony. But even still, despite that, something was pulling at the back of her mind. She kept drifting back to the cloak room. To the thought of his mouth pressed against hers. To the feeling of his hands on her taut body.

Suddenly, she felt a flush of shame wash over her. “How can you think that way about this fucking murderer?” she thought furiously to herself.

“Snap out of it, Eva,” she told herself. And yet, for all her might, she could not keep from wondering what it was about this man that enticed her so. There was a layer she could not see and it drove her almost mad trying to reconcile facts with the unknown.

The ride took approximately forty five minutes and consisted of mostly darkened back roads. Unsurprising for a man of Vasilev’s reputation. To say he had enemies would be a massive understatement.

Finally, they arrived at a large iron gate with a guard shack adjacent. The mountain in the front seat rolled down his window, and spoke quickly and quietly to the guard. Eva took note of this security measure and kept her eyes open for others. surely there were several.

The limo rolled quietly down a long driveway which was most assuredly lined with several closed-circuit cameras, and finally they reached their destination.

Eva had always heard Vasilev was a man of elegant tastes, and it showed. The mansion was everything she could imagine and then some. The grounds were impeccably kept, and as she had already assumed, well-guarded.

The driver put the limo in park, killed the ignition, and moved swiftly to the back door of the car. As Emil exited out his side, the driver opened Eva’s door and none to gently removed her from the vehicle.

They made their way up the front steps and stopped in the breezeway. Vasilev, still silent, looked at Eva casually, then down at the clutch he had taken from her in the cloak room, and then nodded toward a door behind her.

As he turned on a heel and walked away, the wall of humanity standing watch grabbed Eva and directed her to the door Emil had gestured towards. He opened it and led, almost shoved, her down a long staircase.

The landing led straight into a long hallway. “All the way down. Last door on the left,” the driver said in a low growl. As much as Eva wanted to spin around quickly and shatter his kneecap, she nodded softly and started making her way down the long hall.

When they reached the end of the hallway, they stopped at the door.

“In,” the driver grunted.

Eva opened the door and made her way into nothing. The room was almost completely empty save for one lone wooden chair in the middle.

The last thing she heard was the sullen turn of a key and the fading footsteps of her none too charming escort. And then, silence.


Comments

60 responses to “The Kovalenko Chronicles (pt. 3)”

  1. Ooo! I’m invested. Part four, please! 😁

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I think I am too far in at this point not to do a part 4, etc, etc.
      All this from a damn snippet for a picture challenge πŸ˜…

      Liked by 1 person

      1. I think you are too far in, as well. I recommend continuing on as long as possible. 😁
        See how inspiration strikes from the silliest thing ? The snippet for a picture was your muse. 😊

        Liked by 1 person

      2. Yes, I’ll keep going as I am able. I have an idea where to go. A very rough one lol
        Hey, I was content to leave it there. It was a request for a part 2 that did me in 🀣🀣

        Liked by 1 person

      3. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

        Liked by 1 person

      4. I mean, we’ve hit the point where I’ve titled it now, so I’m pretty much screwed lol

        Liked by 1 person

      5. It’s like a cat. Once you name it, that’s it. πŸ˜‚

        Liked by 1 person

      6. Yeah. Now I own it. πŸ˜„

        Liked by 1 person

      7. Precisely. πŸ˜†

        Liked by 1 person

      8. Since I am not going to class tonight (or probably tomorrow due to weather), you may get parts 4 and 5 tonight and Tuesday. πŸ€·β€β™‚οΈ

        Liked by 1 person

      9. Winning! Thanks, snowstorm! πŸ’ƒπŸΌπŸ˜

        Liked by 1 person

      10. Snowstorm and my sinuses. That’s why I blew off tonight lol

        Liked by 1 person

      11. Oh, bummer. my sinuses are acting up too. The trees are starting to bud and I think the pollen is coming out. I hope you feel better soon. Maybe the snow will help clear your sinuses.

        Liked by 1 person

      12. Usually if it rains or snows I get some relief, yes. I think the pressure changes messed with me too. It was 60 on Saturday after being 30s and 40s during the week, and now it;s changing again.
        I’m not awful, but I’m not great either.
        Hey, at least it gives me an excuse to write πŸ˜‰

        Liked by 1 person

      13. I know what you mean. The barometer dropped out about 50 points in the past two days. Just bottomed out. And it’s getting worse tonight into tomorrow. After that it’ll go back up. My migraine is not a fan. I’m on the struggle bus a little bit today, too. The barometer gets me every time.
        Well, whatever it takes to get you to write. ☺️

        Liked by 1 person

      14. I thought of you and your migraines as well and wondered if you were having issues also. Sorry to hear that is the case.
        I guess “luckily” I don’t feel so lousy that I don’t want to write lol

        Liked by 1 person

      15. That’s kind. Thanks, Kevin. I hope your mom’s migraines behave before and during the storm.
        You’ve been bitten by the writing bug lol. Nothing wrong with that. Keeps your mind off your sinuses. 😊

        Liked by 1 person

      16. I have made attempts in the past, but I usually drop them after a short spell. I think because I worry about structure, punctuation, etc. too much. They’re important, I know, but I think they get in my way of just putting shit on the screen.
        Thanks much, my mom usually fares ok, since she has a med that works for her.

        Liked by 1 person

      17. Don’t worry about punctuation or anything like that, just write it. You can go back later and fix the punctuation and the structure. That’s what editing is for. It doesn’t have to be perfect the first time. Don’t be so hard on yourself. Give yourself some grace. 😊
        I’m glad she has a medicine that works. I’ll see how my med holds up tomorrow. 😁

        Liked by 1 person

      18. I’ll keep my fingers crossed for you that they work well 🀞
        That’s kind of what I am doing now. I’m just writing the damn thing. It’s a blog post, for God sake, not a Pulitzer novel πŸ˜„

        Liked by 1 person

      19. Thanks. Tomorrow is my on day for a preventative called Nurtec. Plus I have my daily med. And if I get dizzy, I take something else which is basically Dramamine.
        You can make it a Pulitzer winning novel later, but you have to get something on the page before you do that. So good on you for putting something on the page.😁

        Liked by 1 person

      20. Thanks, we shall see how it goes.

        Note to self: Never put context with an image again. πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

        Liked by 1 person

      21. 🀣 It was really kind of funny how it began. I laughed out loud with the text underneath each picture. The knife πŸ˜‚
        Now it’s like a challenge you can’t put down.

        Liked by 1 person

      22. I figured might as well show some of the outtakes and get some use out of them. If nothing else, comedy. lol
        One pissed me off, because if she hadn’t been holding the knife up, it would have been damn near what I envisioned in my head. Oh, well…AI for you πŸ˜„

        Liked by 1 person

      23. The knife was the funniest part. She just wouldn’t cooperate. πŸ˜†

        Liked by 1 person

      24. No, she would not at all. So close, and yet, so far. πŸ™„

        Liked by 1 person

      25. She did not understand the assignmentπŸ˜†

        Liked by 1 person

      26. Clearly not our best agent.

        Liked by 1 person

      27. Excuse me, the forecast is just changed, and now we are also getting snow. And rain. And ice.😬

        Liked by 1 person

      28. Ours changed too. It’s still snow, but the amount predicted has dropped significantly the last coup,e hours. Sounds like the track is shifting.

        Liked by 1 person

      29. Do you know where it’s shifting to? One guess. πŸ˜…πŸ˜‚

        Liked by 1 person

      30. I think I do at that. πŸ˜ƒ

        Liked by 1 person

      31. As of now, it’s only 3.5 inches predicted. But we went from rain to this. My concern is it’ll push even further south, and it will be a lot more snow. Luckily I work from home.πŸ˜…

        Liked by 1 person

      32. My school is already canceled, so I am free to write or do whatever lmao
        I’m actually working on Pt 4 now.

        Liked by 1 person

      33. I can’t remember the last time I was able to say my school is already canceled, so I can do whatever I want. Maybe like 10th grade? It’s pretty awesome that you can say that now.😊
        I will be waiting patiently for part four πŸ˜…

        Liked by 1 person

      34. Trust me, it’s been a long, long time since I could say it either lol
        Probably be up within a couple hours, so you should see it in the A.M. by latest.

        Liked by 1 person

      35. I think it’s really cool that you could say that. I doubt if I’ll ever be able to say that again in my life lol.
        Cool I’ll read it when I wake up.

        Liked by 1 person

      36. Well, I never thought I would either, so who knows? lol

        Liked by 1 person

      37. I guess anything is possible lol

        Liked by 1 person

      38. The only thing you know for certain, is hey, you never know. πŸ˜‰

        Liked by 1 person

      39. As soon as I say, I can’t imagine how that’s possible, something will happen that it will be become possible, so I’m not going to say it. I’ll just say you’re right, you never know.😊

        Liked by 1 person

      40. Indeed. Life is very funny like that lol
        Almost done with pt 4.

        Liked by 1 person

  2. Ahh! A cliffhanger… You have your followers hooked πŸ˜„

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I’ve titled it now, so I must see it through somehow lol!

      Liked by 1 person

  3. very much enjoying, Kevin….and then the suspense….next please lolπŸ˜‹

    glad you going ahead with this🀍

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thanks, Destiny. Yes, I’m in this deep, might as well keep going πŸ˜„

      Liked by 1 person

      1. lol clearly seen/ read….yup keep going πŸ‘Œ

        Liked by 1 person

      2. I’m working on pt 5 now. 4 will be up in an hour or so.

        Liked by 1 person

      3. removing the zeros πŸ˜‹ = speed 😁
        great going.

        Liked by 1 person

      4. I need to strike while the iron is hot, or this thing will be dead in short order. lol

        Liked by 1 person

      5. might as well…it’s flowing real smooth πŸ‘

        Liked by 1 person

      6. I have a rough idea where I want to go. Very rough, but it’s something. Mostly it’s being made up on the fly. I don’t work well with a net. lol
        Thank you πŸ™

        Liked by 1 person

      7. pleasure.. πŸ™

        Liked by 1 person

  4. Couldn’t see your since yesterday so had to refollow you… Glitches I swearπŸ™ƒ

    Liked by 1 person

    1. It’s unsubbed me from a few folks before too and I’ve had to resubscribe. Annoying to say the least.
      Glad you found me again!

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Yes, glad I remembered your blog name😊

        Liked by 1 person

      2. Don’t worry, If I did not see you for awhile, I’d come looking 😊

        Liked by 1 person

  5. […] Click here for pt. 3 (Links to 1 & 2 also ) […]

    Liked by 1 person

  6. It sounds like Eva’s in for an uncomfortable night!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Just a bit πŸ˜„

      Like

Leave a reply to Susan T. Braithwaite Cancel reply