The Beginning At Last

Until That Day

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by

Kevin
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No Theme Thursday

*Explicit Language/Content Warning*

If I wrote it down or let it out

You’d walk away I have no doubt

And if I let you see inside

I’m sure you’d run away and hide

Your fucking friendship, what a joke

On platitudes I hope you choke

Your hollow words they don’t mean shit

Yet you expect I’ll swallow it

Upon your horse so fucking high

I’ll curse you ’til the day I die

Your loyalty you buy and sell

I’m sure we’ll meet again in Hell

But please I ask until that day

Kindly fucking stay away

© The Beginning At Last

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17 responses to “Until That Day”

  1. Silk Cords Avatar
    Silk Cords

    O_o

    WAY too much of this going around on WP lately. Hang in there. 🙂

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  2. Ana Daksina Avatar
    Ana Daksina

    I’m usually not a fan of poetry of such negative focus ~ but this is perfectly rhymed, perfectly metered, emotionally intense and very understandable, and besides all that there’s a constructive suggestion at its end. Beautiful job.

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  3. Drops of Ink Avatar
    Drops of Ink

    Tell me who I have to 🔪/🪢 for hurting you! 💪🏼 We ride at dawn!! 🐎 🫂🤍

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  4. SiriusSea Avatar
    SiriusSea

    Oh snap, a poetic bitch slap!

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  5. Kymber Hawke Avatar
    Kymber Hawke

    I liked this very much! Who hasn’t felt that way at one time or another?

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  6. Amy Avatar
    Amy

    A powerful poem. Well done.

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  7. Laura Avatar
    Laura

    Release all the rage!

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  8. tenzenmen Avatar
    tenzenmen

    Is she talking to you or are you talking to her?

    Either way – ouch!

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  9. Darryl B Avatar
    Darryl B

    Great poem, Kevin…!

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you, Darryl. Hope you are doing well.

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  10. Destiny Avatar
    Destiny

    I think I am under age and require parental supervision to read and understand this …😋

    well expressed, Kevin 🙏🤍

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  11. Dr. Devika. P. Sreedharan Avatar
    Dr. Devika. P. Sreedharan

    Hey Kevin,
    I can feel the raw emotion in your words. It’s clear that you’re going through a tough time, feeling betrayed and let down by someone you trusted. It’s never easy to realize that someone you thought was a friend isn’t who they seemed to be.
    Your honesty and willingness to express your feelings so openly is admirable. It takes a lot of courage to confront these emotions head-on, even if it’s through writing.
    Remember to take care of yourself during this difficult time. Surround yourself with people who truly value and support you, and don’t be afraid to lean on them for support.
    Sending you strength and solidarity as you navigate through this challenging situation.
    Best,
    Devika.

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  12. Ojaswi Gupta Avatar
    Ojaswi Gupta

    Wow. It’s time to bring out the big guns!! 🗡️

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  13. Aboli Mane Avatar
    Aboli Mane

    Don’t worry, Kevin. You have an army. And there are always people who will understand you (namely all of us here) ❤️

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  14. The Fitch Avatar
    The Fitch

    Good God I’ve rubbed off…. feeling betrayed and of no value is a horrid place until you release the pain into indifference oblivion. I am working on that currently. You will and you’ll be an even stronger gorilla! Maybe get him a new hat.

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    NTT Challenge: 03/28/24 Edition – The Beginning At Last

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      🤘

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