Knight So Black

Once I rode a horse so white

Fought for all that’s good and right

I had a code, I had a creed

Helping others when in need

My heart was pure like driven snow

From mountain high to valley low

My deeds were praised in joyous song

And then one day it all went wrong

They turned on me and cast me out

The epithets I heard them shout

A broken soul, I wandered ’round

Black heart beating, only sound

I threw my armor, shone so bright

For armor that was dark as night

I found myself a charcoal steed

Blackened heart was finally freed

Purified in hate and pain

I set out for the darkened plain

My blade of hardened ebony

Eyes of vengeance set on thee

Heroic once, until I fell

And now I send thee unto Hell

ยฉ The Beginning At Last

“I’m your hate when you want love.”


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25 responses to “Knight So Black”

  1. Great piece Kevin. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

    That knight sounds like my kinda guy. I’m a “antihero/villain” girl. ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

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    1. Thank you, Phoebe. ๐Ÿ™
      I think everyone has that in them. I think the degree just varies from person to person.

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  2. My armor tends to be shades of Gray….

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    1. Fair point. Nothing is rarely all good or all evil.

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  3. goosebumps

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    1. Thank you, Alice. ๐Ÿ™

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  4. Beautiful poetry

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    1. Thank you, Lalita. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

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  5. I like it. Very good.

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    1. Thank you, Liz. ๐Ÿ™

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  6. It’s like a tale spun from the shadows, where the hero’s journey takes an unexpected turn into the depths of darkness. There’s a haunting beauty to it, like a melody that lingers long after it’s played.

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    1. Thank you, Claire. Glad you enjoyed it. ๐Ÿ™

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  7. Powerful piece and steed … awesome image and song!!!

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    1. Thank you, Siri! ๐Ÿค˜๐Ÿค˜

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  8. I read this last night, but I wanted to make sure and get back here to show my support. And, also to tell you how wonderful this poem is!

    I really liked the twist and I thought your word phrasing was beautiful.

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    1. Thank you, Kymber. I am really glad you liked it. ๐Ÿ™
      I often find the darker stuff easier to write.

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      1. I totally understand that. If I let myself go completely, everything i write would be dark.

        I say express yourself however you see fit. ๐Ÿ™‚

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      2. I figure better here than on the street somewhere lol

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      3. That is true. ๐Ÿ˜€

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  9. Wow what a truthful twist of life. Loved it brother ๐Ÿฅฐ

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    1. Thank you, sister. Always appreciated. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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  11. I was just drafting a post that could connect with this, and scratched it but it is a sad state when good people have to go dark to fight for what’s right and just.

    Corruption in society brings out the worst in all of us!!!

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    1. It certainly can brother! It’s an easy transition sometimes unfortunately when you’re surrounded by shit!

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