Drifter In Black

AKA: Ode to the Spaghetti Western

As the church bells toll twelve

Hush falls over the street

The crowd gathers around

In the hot summer heat

How the hell it began

No one really quite knows

There’s a wind from the east

As the tumbleweeds blow

The drifter in black

Six-gun slung at his side

He was just passing through

Just a stop on his ride

Wasn’t looking for trouble

He just wanted a rest

When the sheriff strode up

With his badge on his chest

His breath stank of liquor

He had eyes like a snake

Words got more heated

Was a nasty exchange

Now they stand in the street

Man to man, face to face

Only one way this ends

One ain’t walkin’ away

He’s moving his fingers

It’s a movement so subtle

It was clear right away

Sheriff found him some trouble

In the space of a blink

The gun was up in his hand

Next thing everyone saw

Was another dead man

Sheriff slumped to the ground

Fell down flat on his face

Gun was back in it’s holster

Drifter turned, walked away

When they speak of him now

Tone is hushed ‘hind his back

Today a legend was born

Called The Drifter In Black

© The Beginning At Last


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17 responses to “Drifter In Black”

  1. Blessings. Memories rode to meet you blog: teaching Shane in a Jamaican Secondary School, dramatising the book with my nineth grade class (1974), the death in Mountain View Avenue of the student who played Shane (national election run-up 1975(?), Glorying in Reggae success of the student who played Starret. Wonderful, highly evocative days of youth.

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  2. Wow! You have such a talent for writing!

    As I read each verse of your poem, it was as if I could clearly see everything happening.

    You said he played the guitar, right? Now, if you set these verses you wrote to music, you could definitely make a cool folk song about the legendary Drifter in Black 🙂

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    1. Thanks much, Melissa. I do play, but I am incredibly rusty these days. Incredibly. lol

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  3. Now I can’t get “Paint it Black” out of my head, thank you 😆
    Wonderful weaving of words, paints a story that makes you feel like you’re there, waiting for the next moment to happen. 😊 👏👏

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    1. Thanks, Laura. 😊🙏
      When I was writing it, the theme from The Good, Bad and the Ugly was in my head. Those old spaghetti westerns still hold up today

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      1. Ahh yes, a very good film too

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      2. All the Spaghetti Westerns are really good. Once Upon a Time in the West is a great one too.

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  4. I enjoyef reading this. Another excellent poem you have written up. 🙂

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    1. Thank you Liz. Very glad you liked it 😊

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    Rochdalestu

    Great post Kevin👍 I am fascinated with the story of the Wild West and cowboys etc. and I try to watch all the documentaries I can. Interesting fact that hardly anyone could afford a gun so it was the privileged few who had one.

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    1. Thank you, Stuart. I’m glad you enjoyed it. I dud not know that about the guns. We always assume everyone was running around with them lol

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        Rochdalestu

        Don’t quote me on this but I think people owned a gun of some sort for hunting etc but there were strict laws against carrying weapons. This was up until the end of the Civil War when it was commonplace to carry a gun but not everyone could afford to carry one.

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      2. That’s the polar opposite of what so many if us believe. We tend to envision the old west as one big shootout lol

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        Rochdalestu

        Yeah Hollywood has a lot to answer for 😂

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      4. On several counts lol

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  6. Wow! You need to get these in a book, Kevin. These are excellent poems. Again, the rhythm pulls you along for the ride. Perfect!

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  7. Good stuff, Kevin!

    Well, I picked up on the spaghetti. Western references right away, the Star Wars geek me also immediately started thinking about Cad Bane, who himself was obviously inspired by the spaghetti westerns as well!

    https://images.app.goo.gl/RB7BPMzFfSMJYwny8

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