Phantom Rider

Once, I was an evil man.

I lied, I stole and I killed.

Rattlesnake Martin.

I was his right hand.

Rode together since we were boys.

Together ’til the end.

The end came when I least suspected.

He got greedy.

I got dead.

As I drew my last breath,

I saw the bullets,

They cut my wife and boy down.

I spiraled,

Down,

Down,

Down.

I was on my way to meet the Devil.

I begged.

I pleaded.

God,

Let me avenge my wife,

My boy.

I’ll do anything.

I woke.

The spectral horse,

It ambled toward me.

There was a parchment,

In the saddle bag.

“Avenge your wife and son”

“In exchange, you protect the innocent”

“In My name, you deliver justice.”

I avenged my wife and my boy.

Now, I roam these plains,

For eternity.

A Phantom Rider,

Ready and willing,

To defend the weak,

The poor,

The feeble.

I am their justice.

ยฉThe Beginning At Last


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63 responses to “Phantom Rider”

  1. That’s how I like it. Thanks Kevin ๐Ÿ™

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    1. Thank you, Chris. Very glad you like it. ๐Ÿค 

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      1. Give me a rider and a phantom, HAPPY ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      2. I can’t argue with your taste good sir lol ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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      3. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘

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  2. An avenger! The Phantom Rider is so cool๐Ÿ˜Ž

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    1. Thank you, Aboli! Very glad you liked it! ๐Ÿค 

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  3. Great, as usual ๐Ÿ˜Š
    Striking image as well

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    1. Thank you, Laura. Very glad you enjoyed it. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™

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  4. Kevin, you really nailed this poem, it resonates with deep feelings of loss and pride, great job!!!

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    1. Thank you, Ernie. I’m glad you enjoyed it so much. It was a fun one to write. ๐Ÿค ๐Ÿ‘

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  5. Very cool! There’s nothing like a good old bit of justice!

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    1. Thank you, Susan. This one was a bit of fun to write. ๐Ÿค 

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  6. Ghost Rider !!!!!! Phantom-ly freakin’ fantastic … I want the novel then the movie!!!

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    1. That’s a pretty tall order ๐Ÿ˜„
      Thank you, Siri ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

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  7. Stephanie Avatar
    Stephanie

    Great premise, fits perfectly!

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    1. Thank you, Stephanie ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
      This one was fun to write. ๐Ÿค 

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  8. Perfect words… and the image is so striking too!

    Linda xx

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    1. Thank you very much, Linda! Very happy you enjoyed it! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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  9. Only fighting left !๐Ÿ˜ฒ Only revange! Carry on ๐Ÿ’ช well shared ๐Ÿ˜„

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    1. Yes, revenge indeed! And justice! ๐Ÿ’ช
      Thank you ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

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      1. Ok carry on ๐Ÿ˜. I am a supporter of peace and love. I don’t know why people fight or hurt others. But anyway you are a gorilla ๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿ˜œ so you must fight for justice โ™Ž โš–๏ธ

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      2. There are times when fighting may be the right thing to do. Preferably, it can be avoided, but sometimes the unfortunate truth says otherwise.

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      3. Yes absolutely ๐Ÿ‘ how are you doing? I know it’s too hot ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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      4. I’m doing ok. Trying to regulate my sleep, as it’s been slightly off. How are you today, Teacher?

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      5. It’s good because today is my holiday ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„

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      6. Well isn’t that nice? Enjoy the day then! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜Š

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      7. Yes it’s nice because I am at home not going to school on the sun and don’t have taken classes in too hot ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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      8. Very good! Stay cool and relax then!

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      9. Thank you gorilla ๐Ÿฆ do you know I got one four rating out of five in global Amazon for my book ๐Ÿ˜ and two 5 star rating from India. Just came ๐Ÿ˜ Amazon nine days ago.

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      10. Congratulations! That is most impressive! Here’s to many more! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Š

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      11. Yes thank you ๐Ÿ™‚ i am just trying my best as a very common woman. May God listen to you ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™ . I am one of the fan ๐Ÿ˜Ž of handsome gorilla ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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      12. Thank you very much, but the gorilla is quite common himself. Nothing out of the ordinary lol

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      13. But I never seen such a handsome Gorilla ๐Ÿฆ in my life ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„

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      14. Be careful or you’ll give him an inflated ego ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

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      15. Ha ha ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ no ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› no he is very wise too he knows ego can hurt people ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

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      16. As the old saying goes “pride before a fall” lol

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      17. Ei baba ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฃ nah nah what are you saying ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜ญ I like gorilla ๐Ÿ˜ for his creativity and romantic dress which i never seen ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฉ

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      18. He’s a trendsetter I guess LOL

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      19. Ha ha ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ very update gorilla ๐Ÿ˜ i don’t where did he study ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚? To learn everything ๐Ÿคช๐Ÿคช

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      20. The School of Hard Knocks and life LOL

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      21. Ha ha ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ ok he got life experience ๐Ÿคช i guess ๐Ÿคฃ but it’s ok though I like him. I wish i could be a lady gorilla ๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคช๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜…

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      22. Well it’s not exactly a glamorous life at times. Arguing over who gets the last banana and such ๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿคฃ

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      23. Ha ha ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ uff he learnt everything by fighting for banana oh my God ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃi am laughing loudly ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ you are helirious like me ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜€

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      24. Well, a fellow has to eat after all! ๐Ÿ˜„

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      25. Oh gorilla ๐Ÿ˜ you are so genius ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜ that’s you learnt how to fight. Good well done ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚i laughed a lot alone ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚ by reading your reply ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜… stay smiling ๐Ÿ˜

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      26. I shall try, and you do the same ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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      27. Ok ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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  10. and so it should be…for the better.
    nicely done, Chief…๐Ÿค

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    1. Thank you Lady Destiny. I enjoyed writing this one ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™

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      1. pleasure…๐Ÿค

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  11. Loved this! I had that song ghost riders playing in my head.

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    1. Thank you very much! I enjoyed writing this piece quite a bit. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  12. Willie Torres Jr. Avatar
    Willie Torres Jr.

    WoW. Really Awesome. Love the image as well. Really Cool Brother.

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    1. Thank you Willie. I had a lot of fun with this one ๐Ÿค 

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      1. Willie Torres Jr. Avatar
        Willie Torres Jr.

        It shows… It was Really Awesome.

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      2. Thank you, my friend. I greatly appreciate that.

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      3. Willie Torres Jr. Avatar
        Willie Torres Jr.

        My Pleasure . Have a great night and have a better tomorrow.

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      4. You too, Willie! Take care! ๐Ÿ’ช

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