I Remember

I remember when this house was new

It was built on lands pristine

I remember when this house was full

Most joyous days you’ve ever seen

I remember Grandma baking

As the family gathered round

I remember late night singing

Never heard a sweeter sound

I remember Mother reading

She always voiced the books with flair

I remember Father resting

In his favorite comfy chair

I remember Grandpa working

Working hard out in the field

I remember how he smiled

And how his spirit wouldn’t yield

I remember we were crying

When Grandpa went to sleep that day

I remember how I felt it

As he slowly slipped away

I remember how we drifted

How we slowly parted ways

And I remember how I miss them

Sometimes miss those long gone days

ยฉThe Beginning At Last


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27 responses to “I Remember”

  1. Beautiful and melancholy, but also probably how a lot of people feel ๐Ÿ™ Itโ€™s not anywhere near the same but your poem kinda reminds me of a Five Finger Death Punch song called โ€œRemember Everything,โ€ which is one of my favorites. Love your writing and beautiful images as always Kevin, sorry I got sidetracked lol ๐Ÿ˜†

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    1. Thank you, Laura. ๐Ÿ˜Š Always appreciated.
      It’s funny how certain family members are kind of like the glue that holds a family together. Even if there’s no acrimony, once that person is gone, there’s sometimes a change and people start to drift apart.
      Obviously, other life changes can impact that too, but sometimes that one person is kind of like the first domino.

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      1. Yep, that person was my grandmother so what you say is incredibly true, very much so

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      2. My grandfather and uncle were like that in my family.

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  2. Stephanie Avatar
    Stephanie

    Reading conversation below, was the same in my family. One person. Very nice poem, if a bit sad, Kevin. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thank you, Stephanie. Yes, I was feeling reflective for a moment.

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      1. Stephanie Avatar
        Stephanie

        That’s more than allowed. ๐Ÿ™‚

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      2. Needs to happen sometimes I suppose ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. It sounds dreamy. Like a scene from The Little Matchstick Girl.

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    1. Thank you very much, Tash. Feeling a bit reflective today, I guess.

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      1. I realized afterwards that my comment might have come across as being negative, with the Matchstick Girl being so bittersweet. You know me well enough from my writing, I guess. I appreciate the view more than you know…

        Aroha nui,
        Tash

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      2. Did not take it as negative at all. Thank you very much again. Definitely appreciated.

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  4. A reflection that everyone will relate to in some way or the other. Very raw and emotional brother ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•

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    1. Thank you, little sister. ๐Ÿ˜Š
      I was wondering when you would be back. Glad to see you ๐Ÿ™

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  5. You really are a very fine poet, brother.

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    1. Thank you, Ana. That truly means a great deal to me. Incredibly appreciated. ๐Ÿ™

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  6. Willie Torres Jr. Avatar
    Willie Torres Jr.

    Emotional, Heartfelt and Wonderful Brother

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    1. Thank you very much, Willie. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™

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  8. Such a beautiful and touching poem, Kevin.

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    1. Thank you Susan. Had a reflective moment

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  9. heartfelt, Kevin…and beautiful memories ๐Ÿค

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    1. Thank you Destiny. Deeply appreciated ๐Ÿ™ always

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      1. pleasure always ๐Ÿค๐Ÿ™

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  10. I was there with you. โค

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  11. That was lovely.

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    1. Thank you very much, Pennie. Was feeling a bit reflective. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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