Blocked (The Ballad Of Fried Rice, Chads & Heartache)

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I waited at the Chinese takeout

You said we’d meet at nine

I said I’d place our order

And you told me that was fine

Lobster rice, the fancy kind

For you I bought the best

But now I’m here and waiting

A sinking feeling in my chest

The owner was a dick

And he said I had to leave

Said I couldn’t loiter

He missed the heart upon my sleeve

I took my takeout order

And I stood out in the rain

The bag was getting soggy

As I cried my tears of pain

So I opened the container

And I took a little bite

But my stomach it was turning

‘Cause I knew we’d have a fight

My fingers shaking as I dialed

I was afraid to hear your voice

Imagine my surprise

When I knew you’d made your choice

All at once it hit me

All at once my world was rocked

You had chose a Chad and left me

And my number had been blocked

ยฉThe Beginning At Last


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30 responses to “Blocked (The Ballad Of Fried Rice, Chads & Heartache)”

  1. That was really good! ๐Ÿ‘

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    1. Thank you, Steven! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  2. Man you rocked this one brother, this is fantastic! ๐Ÿ†๐Ÿ†๐Ÿ†

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    1. Thank you, E-Dawg! Glad you liked it! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  3. I think if we collect all stories behind this โ€œblockedโ€ word, we can write so many real time anecdotes that would fill a book. Such painful stories I am sure. ๐Ÿ‘

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    1. Painful, possibly. But I would be willing to bet there’s some funny ones too.

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  4. This is really heartfelt. You nailed the emotion perfectly,Kevin!โœจ

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    1. Thank you very much, Sia! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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    1. Thank you! ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™

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  5. Oh my goodness…a “worst day ever”…

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    1. His worst is likely her best day in an ironic twist ๐Ÿ˜„

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  6. The most hilarious one yet!! I canโ€™t wait to post my poem for these images ๐Ÿคช (maybe in like a day) haha ๐Ÿคฃ thanks for the laughs as always ๐Ÿ˜†

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    1. Thank you, Laura. Just a bit of humor. Can’t be serious all the time. ๐Ÿ˜‰
      Looking forward to your version! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. 10amish this Morning!! ๐Ÿ˜† need that humor!

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      2. Crap nvm, itโ€™s at 2:30pmish lol ๐Ÿ˜†
        Coffee hasnโ€™t kicked in yet ๐Ÿคช
        Not sure itโ€™ll top yours at all but hey!

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      3. Well, it’s not a competition. And if it is, no one told me, damn it lol
        I eagerly await it. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      4. Itโ€™s definitely not, Iโ€™m just giving you a compliment and saying your writing is better in every way lol ๐Ÿ˜†

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      5. Oh, I don’t buy that at all. You are a fantastic writer and do a stellar job of connecting with folks. That’s huge. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      6. And, yet, here is the blind man who is unable to see what his writing and images does for so many people ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜œ ๐Ÿ˜‰ seriously ๐Ÿ™

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      7. Oh, it’s all just whatever drivel I come up with that day. Nothing that special really.

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      8. Just saying is all. ๐Ÿคทโ€โ™‚๏ธ

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  8. This is terrific! I love your sense of humor! ๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. Thank you, Kymber ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
      I couldn’t help myself lol

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