Into The Night (The Realization Of Giving Up)

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Giving up

Too old to care

The more you strive

The less you’re there

Looking back

On better days

Looking back

See through the haze

A younger man

You used to be

A spirit wild

So bold and free

Nothing ever

Stopped you then

Then it changed

You don’t know when

It seems you’ve felt

This way for years

And now you’re facing

All those fears

Not vital now

An afterthought

The harshest rule

That life has taught

No need to try

No need to fight

Just fade away

Into the night

ยฉThe Beginning At Last


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17 responses to “Into The Night (The Realization Of Giving Up)”

  1. This describes the thoughts of age perfectly.

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    1. Thank you, brother. I feel that way a lot of days I must admit.

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  2. Sounds like something Bob Seger could put to musicโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜‘

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    1. A little “Turn the Page” vibe, you thinking?
      Thank you, Darryl. Much appreciated. ๐Ÿ™

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  3. Never give up
    Itโ€™s not who you are
    It may not be as easy
    As wishing on stars
    Your wild spirit
    Itโ€™s still inside
    Youโ€™ll forever wow me
    With your brilliant mind
    Meeting you
    Was so unexpected
    If I ever stopped writing
    I wouldโ€™ve regretted it
    You motivate me
    You inspire others
    Never an afterthought
    To some, youโ€™re a brother
    A warrior, a fighter
    Youโ€™ll never fade away
    An amazing writer
    For all the days
    So pick up your boots
    Dust off your knees
    Words never could express
    How much you mean to me โค๏ธ
    Forever and ever
    Yes itโ€™s true
    Hold your head high
    And weโ€™ll see this through

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    1. I truly don’t have any words right now other than “thank you” ๐Ÿค—

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      1. Youโ€™re welcome, always ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿค—

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      2. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜Š

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  4. Not everyone chooses to rage against the dying of the light. A poem of perspective.

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    1. Sometimes the fight doesn’t feel worth it.

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  5. Love this one Kevin

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    1. Thank you very much, Cheryl. It’s just the vibe these days…

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  6. The best is yet to come.

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    1. I’d like to hope so, Mary. ๐Ÿ™

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  7. Willie Torres Jr. Avatar
    Willie Torres Jr.

    Great Post my Friend

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