The Beginning At Last

Primal

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by

Kevin
in

To embrace the primal

Dead of night

To know excitement

Of the fight

To feel the fury

Deep within

To embrace the wild

Blood on skin

To feel the rush

Of bestial rage

To break the bondage

Of this cage

To roam the jungle

A slave to none

To live this life

A primal one

©The Beginning At Last

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18 responses to “Primal”

  1. Laura Avatar
    Laura

    This is how I feel when I’m free from work. Rawrrrrrr lol 🤪
    Good job, Kevin 😊

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      I do for the ride home. Then I quickly crash and burn lol
      Thank you 🤗😊

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      1. Laura Avatar
        Laura

        But at least at that moment we are freeeeee
        Haha and you’re always welcome 🤗 I really liked this one
        Well, I like them alllll but…you know what I mean 😜

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      2. Kevin Avatar
        Kevin

        Yes, the feeling of freedom is nice for sure.

        Yes, I know what you mean. Thank you 🤗

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  2. rugby843 Avatar
    rugby843

    Guess he’s not wearing a tux tonight😉

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Casual Saturday 😄

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  3. Justin Avatar
    Justin

    That was really well written!

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Justin! 😊

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  4. Ernie 'Dawg' Avatar
    Ernie ‘Dawg’

    Awesome poem and fits the picture to a T, well done.

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you, my brother. I felt the need for something with a bit of an edge. 👊

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      1. Ernie 'Dawg' Avatar
        Ernie ‘Dawg’

        Definitely raw and on the edge.

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  5. KC Avatar
    KC

    Wow!

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      😊😊

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  6. Tashintheclouds Avatar
    Tashintheclouds

    Work and society… Too much of mediocre things. I can relate.

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      I think a lot of folks can unfortunately.
      Thank you Tash 🙏

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  7. Tashintheclouds Avatar
    Tashintheclouds

    You are most welcome. Enjoy the wild side.

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  8. Mary K. Doyle Avatar
    Mary K. Doyle

    We cannot be a slave to anyone. No sir. Good poem, Kevin.

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Mary. Sometimes we feel the urge to break free. 🦍

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