The Beginning At Last

Final Rest

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by

Kevin
in
No Theme Thursday: 09.05.24

As I crush your skull beneath my heel

As the bodies break beneath the wheel

You will know my sorrow and my pain

Before your eyes all shall be lain

You will see your crimes and all your sin

Your cries of anguish above the din

Feel sharpened spear against your chest

As I send thee to your final rest

©The Beginning At Last

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16 responses to “Final Rest”

  1. Kritika Avatar
    Kritika

    A warrior poem. Great read.

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Kritika! 😊😊

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        Kritika

        My pleasure Kevin 🙂

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  2. Laura Avatar
    Laura

    Intense and good! Make them feel the pain! 😊
    Love this Kevin, a great way to wake up this AM to remind me to not take any …. Well, you know 😜

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Indeed!

      Thank you very much, Laura. Happy to put a little hitch in your giddy up today (yesterday? lol) 😊

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  3. Ernie 'Dawg' Avatar
    Ernie ‘Dawg’

    An angry war cry from the heart, nice

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Just a little something something to get the blood flowing lol
      Thank you, brother! 👊

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  4. Kymber Hawke Avatar
    Kymber Hawke

    I love this. So powerful!

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      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Kymber! 😊

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  5. KC Avatar
    KC

    Beautifully penned!

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      Kevin

      Thank you KC!! 😄

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  6. Destiny Avatar
    Destiny

    great flow, Chief

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Destiny. Very glad you enjoyed it. 🙏

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        Destiny

        pleasure 🙏🤍

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