The Beginning At Last

Restless Soul

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by

Kevin
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No Theme Thursday: 11.07.24

An Autumn chill

A darkened night

A restless soul

Is taking flight

Across the skies

Across all time

Another word

In sacred rhyme

Incantations

Among the stars

A soul too near

A soul too far

A dream unleashed

A dream untamed

A restless soul

Can’t be contained

©The Beginning At Last, Nov 2024

Comments

25 responses to “Restless Soul”

  1. Laura Avatar
    Laura

    Mmmm yep, that sounds indeed like a restless soul 😆
    Just don’t send it to me in dreams, please 🙏

    Good job as always, Kevin 😊 ❤️

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      You know what? I have to go back and look at what I wrote because I already totally forgot. 😄
      Where the souls goes, I have no control. It does what it wants, when it wants LOL
      Thank you 🤗

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      1. Laura Avatar
        Laura

        I hate when that happens. When you try to find a post and it’s like hmmm nope not here…I forgot what I wrote or where I wrote it! Lol

        Always welcome 🤗 🥰 😍

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      2. Kevin Avatar
        Kevin

        The problem is I forget shit I wrote the same day. lol
        Old age setting in I guess 😄😄

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  2. Stephanie Avatar
    Stephanie

    👏 👏 👏

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Stephanie. 😊

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  3. Robin Ward Avatar
    Robin Ward

    Captivating poem, Kevin. Wonderfully written. Thank you:)

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Robin! Very glad you enjoyed it 😊

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  4. Christine Avatar
    Christine

    Purposeful

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Christine 🙏

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      1. Christine Avatar
        Christine

        Your heart is in this

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      2. Kevin Avatar
        Kevin

        I think there’s more than a few restless souls out there that can relate.

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  5. Destiny Avatar
    Destiny

    beautifully captured and expressed, Chief…

    Liked by 3 people

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much Destiny. It was just kind of…there, I guess 😊

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  6. thomasstigwikman Avatar
    thomasstigwikman

    That is an intense and soulful poem. It was a delight to read.

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Thomas. The words just came to me in a rush one day so I took them down 😊

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  7. Mary K. Doyle Avatar
    Mary K. Doyle

    I like this, Kevin. What can be more dynamic than a dream unleashed?

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Mary. Very few things in this life, I’d wager. 😊

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  8. Nancy (The Sicilian Storyteller) Avatar
    Nancy (The Sicilian Storyteller)

    Nice verse, Kevin.
    We’re all restless souls at one time or another.
    Well done!

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Nancy. Some of us more often than others, I’d imagine 😊

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  9. Willie Torres Jr. Avatar
    Willie Torres Jr.

    Wonderful Poem and Great Image

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, my brother. Most deeply appreciated 😊😊

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  10. Nicole Horlings Avatar
    Nicole Horlings

    Great poem, Kevin! I really liked these lines: “Across the skies / Across all time / Another word / In sacred rhyme”

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Nicole. They kind of just came to me from nowhere so I put them down 🙏🙏

      Liked by 1 person

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