All The Lies

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She says she loves you.

She lied.

While they’re all laughing,

You cried.

They said they’d help you.

Denied.

All sense of hope?

It died.

You see those smiles?

Sheer illusion.

You hear those whispers?

Their collusion.

Your “friends” are serpents.

A den of snakes.

Veneer of sweetness.

Another fake.

You choose to trust them.

You are a fool.

You should trust no one.

Live by this rule.

Love is a lie.

A grand design.

But you are blinded.

Can’t see the signs.

One day you’ll see it.

By then too late.

You’ll see their “love”.

Is cloaked in hate.

ยฉThe Beginning At Last, Nov 2024

As I am sometimes accused of being “cryptic” with my poetry, I shall attempt to share the origin of the above words.

I studied the above image for about 30 minutes. I took it in and allowed the despair depicted within it to wash over me.

I recalled heartbreaks, disappointments and struggles that I have experienced or witnessed in my own lifetime.

The loss of loved ones.

The betrayal by supposed friends.

The double standards.

Loyal efforts cast aside and spit upon.

Good people driven to bad ends.

I recalled it and I felt it all.

I felt it all, and I descended into the well of despair to retrieve the words you read above.

If you read the above and you remember the heartbreaks, the disappointments and the struggles you have experienced in your own lives, then you know from whence these words came. And perhaps for a moment, you will find yourself descending into the well of despair.

If you do, then I have, at least for a moment, accomplished my mission as the writer of this piece by making you think.

Thank you for reading, and be well.


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84 responses to “All The Lies”

  1. Christine Avatar
    Christine

    I don’t see cryptic in your writing. I see life. Viable heartfelt truth.
    That is what writing is. A parr of the soul.
    If you ever have read the book of Psalms in scripture, its power shows throughout

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    1. Sometimes people think I am targeting them, and it’s usually not the case. Hence, the disclaimer.

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      1. People like to make everything about themselves I guess? I never found your writing cryptic either. Your poetry is very straightforward in comparison to many others.

        Anyway, I like this one. Well done.

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      2. I think it’s partly that, or sometimes certain phrases might make people think it’s a shot at them? With the amount of venom in this one, I figured better safe than sorry. I also enjoyed writing the recap in an odd way. Not something I’ve been known to do before.
        Thank you very much ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

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  2. Excellent poem, Kevin! ๐Ÿ‘โ™ฅ๏ธ

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    1. Thank you very much Bianca! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. It’s my pleasure, Kevin! ๐Ÿ˜Šโ™ฅ๏ธ

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  3. Wow! This poem hits home with serious emotion Kevin. It brings forth feelings of the past vividly for me. A fantastic writing. And the explanation is very heartfelt bro. Amazing job.

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    1. Thank you, my brother. I’m very glad that it was able to make you feel something. It may not be my most inspiring work, but it’s a place we’ve all been and can easily relate to.
      Grateful for your words ๐Ÿ™

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  4. Sometimes you wanna conjure the deep, dark, and depressing.
    And then sometimes you donโ€™t.
    But it was very well written. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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    1. Well, sometimes the words are just laying around waiting to be found, and this a natural place to go on occasion. Sometimes a stay there is a good lesson and reminder to oneself.
      If it makes the reader think, or feel, even for a moment, then it was worth committing to print I guess.
      Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. Iโ€™m sure Iโ€™ve said that before, actually. So yes, very true.

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      2. Indeed ๐Ÿ˜Š

        (Got to take my word back after someone swiped it ๐Ÿ˜†)

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      3. Iโ€™m allowed to swipe whatever the heck I want ๐Ÿคช

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      4. Oh, really now? ๐Ÿคจ

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      5. Yep ๐Ÿคช

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      6. Hmmm…๐Ÿคจ

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  5. Thank you for sharing. Two years ago, I would have taken this personally and tried to figure out how you knew so much. I have learned much since then. When you get stuck in overthinking, it runs in a loop and what may have begun as a minor infraction becomes a sinister plot. The problem is, you become the menacing villain. We create our world in many ways, it starts with perception. Perception becomes emotion. Emotion becomes thought. Thought becomes action. Action becomes effect on the world and that is manifestation.

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  6. Nothing cryptic about this, Kevin.
    Been there, done that. This one hits close to home. Sometimes you don’t know until it’s too late. A few faces and memories definitely resurfaced. You have definitely accomplished your mission as the writer of this piece. Bravo! ๐Ÿ‘

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    1. Thank you very much, Shweta. I had hoped to take the reader on a journey. Albeit, not the most pleasant, but a journey nonetheless ๐Ÿ™

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      1. Always a pleasure, Kevin ๐Ÿ˜Š
        Sometimes we have to dig a bit deeper into the dark side too. The particular prompt image makes despair feel very palpable indeed!

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      2. That’s what rang out to me as I was creating it. And the more I studied it the more I felt it

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      3. I went down a similar dark route for my take too. You definitely did a good job with this one ๐Ÿ‘
        Looking forward to the next set of images for this week’s NTT

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      4. Yes, I saw your journey to the well also. The picture kind of called for it to me.
        I’m currently working on that post now, I am about halfway done. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      5. Here’s hoping that I can come up with an entry or two ๐Ÿคž

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      6. I have faith ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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      7. I am touched by that support! I am not so sure myself ๐Ÿ˜‚

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      8. Bah! That’s rubbish and you know it! You’ll get it done. ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘

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      9. Well, I am my worst critic. I’ll stay tuned for the next NTT post.

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      10. Tomorrow around 1230 US time if my memory serves ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      11. When you say US time, that’s EST right? I’ll keep checking, Kevin. Thank you for the heads up.

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      12. Yes, EST. Which I am sure you figured out by now ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„

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      13. Yes I did and the first post is ready too. Didn’t even take me that long to come up with it. A lot of good images. My first post will be up by this Sunday.

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      14. See? I told you I had faith! ๐Ÿ’ช
        Looking forward to it! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      15. Touchรฉ, Mr G.
        I’m pleased to hear that. Thank you. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      16. My pleasure of course ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  7. Very good and well-written! ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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    1. Thank you very much, John. Very grateful that you liked it ๐Ÿ™

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      1. Youโ€™re welcome, Kevin! I hope you have a great night. ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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      2. Thank you, John and a great evening to you as well! ๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿ˜Ž

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  8. I applaud your poetry and wisdom of life. I understand when you wrote this, it all had to come out raw and brute. You mastered it well. Quite dark.

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    1. Thank you, Chris. Some days those kinds of words are just lying around waiting to be found. Most grateful my friend ๐Ÿ™

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  9. Very good Kevin. Very deep, very real. Many of us have also felt the pain.

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    1. Thank you very much, Pennie. I believe many can relate, and I hope it resonates with all ๐Ÿ™

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  10. I just have to call my mother. That’s the Grand Canyon of darkness. ๐Ÿ˜…

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    1. Am I the only person in the world who didn’t have a bad relationship with my mother? I swear I feel that way sometimes.
      Now, father, on the other hand…๐Ÿ™„

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      1. Haha, well, we weren’t allowed to call her Mum for a start. Just Aunt. She blamed me for our father’s dementia just a few years ago. The rest, I can’t remember, but I’ve been told.

        *Shrug*

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      2. I’m grateful that my mother and I have always had a good relationship overall.
        I can’t say I had a bad one with my father, because I didn’t have one period lol

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    2. This made me laugh much harder than it shouldโ€™ve ๐Ÿ˜†

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  11. Christine Avatar
    Christine

    ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ‘ disclaimer

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    1. Sometimes they’re needed ๐Ÿคทโ€โ™‚๏ธ

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  12. Willie Torres Jr. Avatar
    Willie Torres Jr.

    Very Powerful Feelings of emotions here Brother. Great and Powerful Poem

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    1. Thank you very much, Willie. It was easy and hard to write all at the same time, if that makes sense ๐Ÿ™

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      1. Willie Torres Jr. Avatar
        Willie Torres Jr.

        It does. I can sense the deep pain and emotional struggle, sorry you went through that.

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      2. Thank you, my brother. We have all had our low points, and I have witnessed it in the lives of others too. This was an amalgam of all those experiences.

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  13. You bared your soul, my friendโ€ฆ Nicely done

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    1. Thank you very much, KC. Great to hear from you again ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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  14. Felt it Kevin!
    Brilliant.

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    1. Thank you, Maggie. A very easy and very hard one to write all at the same time. ๐Ÿ™

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      1. I hear that my friend.
        You are very welcome always ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

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  15. Loved it but I won’t allow myself to fall into the well of despair as I find it so difficult to climb out. These days I admire from afar.

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    1. I have a bad habit of dipping my toe in that pool fairly often. Character flaw. One of several ๐Ÿ˜„

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      1. I get it, believe me. But I know myself well enough! Most of my energy now goes into being annoyingly positive.๐Ÿ˜Š

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      2. Just don’t cross the line into toxic positivity ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„
        No, I completely get it. It’s not a fun place to be, and honestly I should hang out less no that property too.

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  16. Not all who wander are lost Avatar
    Not all who wander are lost

    DAMN! This brought SO many feels and empathy. So powerful and pure. Wish I couldn’t empathize, but that’s realize. All we can do it move beyond. Sending a virtual hug to all those who have felt this level of hurt. You are loved.

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    1. Thank you, Sarah. I’m sure, unfortunately, many can relate. If it made anyone feel or think for a moment, then I have succeeded. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  17. Stephanie Avatar
    Stephanie

    This is great, Kevin. I really felt his confinement and was reminded of times when I felt each of line, though thankfully rarely all at the same time!

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    1. Stephanie Avatar
      Stephanie

      *-of

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    2. Thank you very much, Stephanie. It was easy and difficult to write, I must admit. I tend to visit that place often, but some visits tend to sting more than others. ๐Ÿ™

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  18. A powerful poem, Kevin, and heartfelt, too. ๐ŸŒธ

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    1. Thank you very much, Kymber. It definitely took a bit out of me. ๐Ÿ™

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  19. This is an excellent read, Kevin …. both your verse and your explanation. Very fine writing, my friend. ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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    1. Thank you very much, Nancy. It was a tough one to write, and yet easy at the same time. A bit draining, but rewarding too. ๐Ÿ™

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      1. Those are the best ones, I think!

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      2. It seems they often tend to be, yes!

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  20. Itโ€™s fairly easy to get into a pit of despair. Iโ€™m trying not to get too far into it and concentrate on the good things in my life. Iโ€™m also tired of writing about Trump although I donโ€™t think itโ€™s possible to stay quiet. Writing I feel is a great way to get out of myself for a while. Good luck in your endeavors!

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    1. I don’t get into the whole political thing, but I am at the point where I am just moving on with my day and focusing on myself at this time. My health and wellbeing are my number one priority. Namely: solving this sleep riddle. ๐Ÿ˜„
      I can completely understand folks not wanting to linger near the pit of despair. I do it probably a bit more than is recommended, but it’s partly my nature.

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  21. Your images speak to us, even you. Good poem with the image, Mr. Kevin.

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    1. Thank you very much, Mary. Yes, sometimes I can even find something deep in the images, especially if I really look at them for a spell.

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  22. It was a dark poem. But like you suggested it made me remember disappointments, cruel people, and setbacks of all kinds. They are part of us but aren’t us. We can’t and shouldn’t forget but not let it keep us down either.

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    1. Thank you very much, Thomas. You are quite right – we can’t let it keep us down. All we can do is learn from it and move on with our life.

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  23. Wow! Excellently written, powerful, and poignant, Kevin! The terse even lines, highlighted brilliantly with rhymes, really hit home.

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    1. Thank you very much, Nicole. It was easy and hard to write in many ways. Greatly appreciated. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

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