Walking Away

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I feel the need to walk away

Perhaps return another day

Times they change, and people too

I feel at last my time is through

Moving on, I don’t know where

Without a clue, without a care

A song once said ‘While it’s still fun”

“Walk before they make me run”

Within my head those words ring true

So now I say goodbye to you

Perhaps our paths will cross again

I don’t know how or even when

If fate decides this is the last

With fondest eyes I’ll view the past

Farewell my friends, do not despair

Remember that I once was there

“Before They Make Me Run” written by Mick Jagger and Keith Richards


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37 responses to “Walking Away”

  1. Sometimes all you could do is walk away. It doesn’t mean that you’re giving up or quitting. It just means that you’re done wasting time.

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  2. “Times they change, and people too”- this is so true. Often the time comes when we have to move on and have outgrown people or a place.

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    1. That’s where I am today.
      Needed to see it written out in front of me to be sure.

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      1. That’s where I’m at right now too so I appreciate you writing it out. Found it really relatable.

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      2. Thanks, Pooja. The irony for me is it may have actually influenced me the other way, but that’s why I put it on the screen: I needed to know.
        I know that doesn’t make sense, but it does to me lol

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      3. No, I totally get it. Writing stuff down really helps us figure out our thoughts and emotions.

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  3. Great song. Jagger and Richards are killing it.

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    1. That’s one of my favorite Stones tunes. Keith isn’t a great singer, but the ones he sings fit his voice to a T, in my opinion.

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      1. Give Keith a bottle of booze and he’ll sing like an Angel 😁

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      2. I am completely convinced that at the end of time, the only thing left will be Keith Richards, a distillery and a Fender Telecaster and he’ll be singing a song about outliving us all πŸ˜„

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      3. Damn right, that guy is indestructible, a living legend

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      4. And considering all the very hard miles, he could look a lot worse! πŸ˜„
        I swear, the secret is just plain not giving a flying F.

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      5. So true πŸ’―

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      6. I don’t know if I’d advise the amount of drinking and other substances, but we can take at least one page from ol’ Keef. πŸ˜„

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      7. Yeah, Keith he knows how to live 😁

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      8. Can’t deny that lol

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      9. “Under the influence” on Netflix, must see about Keith Richards 😊

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      10. Cool. I’ll have to check it out. 😎
        You ever see the documentary about Chuck Berry that he was in back in the 80s?
        Hail Hail Rock & Roll. He was the bandleader, and if I recall, him and Chuck had a couple epic arguments lol

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      11. Nope, that on Netflix? If yes, I’ll check it out.

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      12. I’m currently on Amazon Prime and Pluto TV looks like.
        Side note: Apparently, Keith has a collection of over 3,000 guitars. 😲
        I mean, I know he’s loaded, but 3,000? Damn lol

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      13. Crazy 🀣 I’ll check Amazon Prime

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  4. “Times they change, and people too” – perfect

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  5. Loved reading over this poem – or are these song lyrics, Kevin?

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    1. Just the lines in quotes, The rest are mine,
      I’m having a “should I stay or should I go?” moment lately.
      Thanks, Janet. πŸ™

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      1. I hope whether you stay or go, you make yourself happy. That’s the most important part, Kevin. You are what’s most important xx

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      2. Thanks, Janet. πŸ™‚
        I’m usually pretty good at determining my shelf life and knowing when it’s time to move on.

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  6. Moving is what matters. Where to, only time can say!

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  7. The imagery captures the feeling of uncertainty and the inevitability of change in life’s journey. It speaks to the transient nature of relationships and experiences, acknowledging the bittersweet farewell to familiar paths and people.πŸ‘ŒπŸŽ‰

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    1. Thank you very much for your comment. I deeply appreciate your insight. Hope you have a great day. πŸ™

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      1. πŸ€πŸ‘πŸŽ‰

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  8. When I read this page, I wanted ti send my feedback in length. I have been there in that place. To move on is the most hardest thing, that would do us good personally, but have no clue β€œhow?”. At some point of time, I felt like being in the soil pit, unable to get myself up on the surface. The more I tried, the more it took me down. But one day, I came to the surface. Still I was sitting on the ground watching the soil pit, couldn’t make myself walk away. An attachment to the pit. After months, I walked away, but kept looking back. I have gotten out of the place finally, but with a huge void within me. Moving on helps us a lot, but how to fill the void is a million dollar question”?”

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    1. This is very valuable and interesting feedback. Thank you. I would also say that sometimes, though. the void might actually be much needed space. I think that is where each individual needs to figure out what it is to them.
      Is it leaving a void? Or giving you space that you truly need? Maybe it’s a space that’s not meant to be filled right away.
      It could also come down to what it truly better for us. Is it better to remain in the pit or face the void? I think it comes down to a choice of priorities and balance.

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      1. Yes, definitely facing the void is lot better than being in the pit. Well said πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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      2. Thank you. At least with the unknown void, there is the chance for a new adventure. πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

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