Day After Day On The Dock

No Theme Thursday submission. Not my best, but it’s the best I have to give right now.

Sun shines on the bay, just like the Journey song

Not sure if I’m right or if maybe I went wrong

I hear Otis singing, I watch tides rolling away

I hear her voice so clearly, it’s just like yesterday

She’s more than a woman, just like the Bee Gees said

I’m all by myself, dreams of you all through my head

I’m playing my guitar, but all it does is weep

I go out every night, I don’t want to go to sleep

Want you just the way you are, that’s all I ever need

Love lying in my hands, all I can do is watch it bleed

Baby please don’t go, don’t leave me here this way

In my lonely gloom, I remain day after day


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25 responses to “Day After Day On The Dock”

  1. Heartfelt and beautiful. Well done. 🤍👏🏼

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  2. ” not my best”….it’s great, Kevin…some sad going around today it seems unless my interpretations are off…😬

    need I knock the gloom off with my frying pan to help you along 🍳…just kidding, Kevin.

    read seriously 🤍🙏

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    1. Mostly anger from me, not sure about anyone else.

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      1. hope it’s a better day for you, Kevin 🤍
        (time zones confuse me …same day few hours later or new day….🥴)
        still…wishing it better 🙏

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      2. Thank you, Destiny. A little after midnight here.

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      3. early morning here…cheer up, Chief.
        it’s a little worrying not seeing you around with your words of encouragement to others..🙏🤗

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      4. Thank you. Unfortunately I don’t have much encouragement to offer anyone anymore.

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      5. so here’s some for you…going to try to be wise a little so if I go the wrong way please forgive me….🥴

        whatever it is….this too shall pass ….they say🙄
        new day dawns new hope….🤔

        sorry I can’t remember any more quotes right now….only one coffee down 🥴

        you’ve come through a lot, Chief…give yourself credit for that and get moving (stern)

        go easy on yourself…we are allowed these moments as long as we don’t let it bring us to a level that’s hard to get back up from.

        I think that’s enough wise for one day….😬

        take care, Kevin….sending happy thoughts your way 🤍🙏🤗

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  3. Loved it!! Deep and captivating 😊

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    I haven’t had the motivation to use any AI lately, it’s crazy. I was in love with it before a month ago, lol. I think I’m just getting jaded with how all the normies are suddenly realizing it’s not just a fad and now it’s all they can talk about. Yes, Susan, I know you can use ChatGPT to build a meal plan.

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    1. I’m rapidly becoming jaded with most things computer or online related.

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  5. Sitting on the dock by the bay is a fav !! … While the gorilla’s guitar gently weeeeeps !! Peaceful, Kevin ❤ !!

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  6. As long as it comes from the heart, it’s “your best”, and I thought it was pretty darn good. 🙂

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  7. Passionate, Kevin.

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  8. Another good one.

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  9. I think it’s great, Kevin!

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  10. Your words pierce right through! The ink of your pain speaks volumes! 📝🔏🗡️💪🏾✨

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  11. I love this Kevin ❤️ Sending you some happy thoughts 😄

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    1. Thank you, Aboli. I hope you have a nice evening. 🙏

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    1. 👍👍

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  13. I love this and the pictures to go with it. 😊

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    1. Thank you, Liz. 😊

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