The Beginning At Last

Like I Was Never Here

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by

Kevin
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I roam the hallways of my mind

Seeking solace I won’t find

The days they pass and feel like years

I search for laughter in the tears

I feel the silence crushing me

A burden whence I can’t break free

I walk with naught but hate and fear

You pass like I was never here

©️ The Beginning At Last

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20 responses to “Like I Was Never Here”

  1. Mr. B Avatar
    Mr. B

    Interesting rhythm and rhyme, almost like a limerick.

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  2. VanyA V@idehi:8324 Avatar
    VanyA V@idehi:8324

    Interesting

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  3. Drops of Ink Avatar
    Drops of Ink

    Fantastic 👏🏼👏🏼 I can really relate to this one.

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Phoebe. I am glad if it resonated with you. 🙏

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  4. Ria Avatar
    Ria

    You nailed it Kevin. I loved it!

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you, Ria. I am glad if you found it enjoyable 🙏🙏

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  5. rugby843 Avatar
    rugby843

    That is a very cool looking ghost!

    Sent from Yahoo Mail for iPhone

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you 🙏
      I was trying to make something a bit different

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  6. daisy Avatar
    daisy

    Wow! Superb👏

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you, Daisy. Much appreciated 🙏🙏

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  7. Ernie Federspiel Avatar
    Ernie Federspiel

    The poem rocks but that picture, just WOW!

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you, Ernie. Glad you enjoyed them 🙏🙏

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  8. Destiny Avatar
    Destiny

    🤍🙏🌷…

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  9. Mary K. Doyle Avatar
    Mary K. Doyle

    The hallways of my mind. . . So good, Kevin.

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  10. Bianca Alina Avatar
    Bianca Alina

    Wonderfully written, Kevin! 👏♥️

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you, Bianca. Appreciated always. 🙏🙏

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      1. Bianca Alina Avatar
        Bianca Alina

        It’s always a pleasure to read you, Kevin! 😊

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      2. Kevin Avatar
        Kevin

        🙏🙏😊

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  11. Drops of Ink Avatar
    Drops of Ink

    Haven’t seen you around today. I hope you’re doing okay. 🙏🏼

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you, Phoebe. I’m up and down at the moment but I’ll survive. 🙏

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