The Beginning At Last

On Eternal Edge

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Kevin
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On eternal edge, a final stand

Will you seize your moment by the hand?

Will you take a look before you leap?

Are fears within what you shall keep?

Will you spread your wings and try to fly?

Will your dreams all wither, waste and die?

Are you afraid of meeting earth?

Only you know what the risk is worth

What if you soar up, ever high?

Are you bound to ground, or will you try?

©️The Beginning At Last

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19 responses to “On Eternal Edge”

  1. Laura Avatar
    Laura

    Very, very good 👏👏
    Love it and it sends a great message!
    Excellent writing and fantastic image as usual, Kevin 😊

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you, Laura. Very happy you liked it. Greatly appreciated 😊😊

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  2. Destiny Avatar
    Destiny

    on eternal edge…and apt title for a thought provoking flow🤍🙏

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you, Lady Destiny. Always appreciated. 🙏🙏

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  3. Stephanie Avatar
    Stephanie

    Oooh, this almost needs a “Lose Yourself” type hook in the background. 🙂

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you, Stephanie. 🙏🙏 Greatly appreciated and glad you enjoyed it. 😊

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  4. Bianca Alina Avatar
    Bianca Alina

    Beautifully written, Kevin! 👏♥️

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Bianca! Very glad you enjoyed it. 😊😊

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      1. Bianca Alina Avatar
        Bianca Alina

        It’s my pleasure, Kevin! 😊😊♥️

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  5. aastha Avatar
    aastha

    Very introspective brother 🤗💕

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you little sister 😊😊

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  6. rugby843 Avatar
    rugby843

    Always have to try, whatever it is

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Indeed we do. 🙏😊🙏

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  7. Willie Torres Jr. Avatar
    Willie Torres Jr.

    Wonderfully written Brother 👍👍

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much Willie! Hope you are having a great day!

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  8. Ana Daksina Avatar
    Ana Daksina

    Really nice.

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you, Ana. Most greatly appreciated 🙏

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