The Beginning At Last

Paradise

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by

Kevin
in
No Theme Thursday: 08.29.24

Somewhere far away

To a place I’ve never known

There lies a paradise

Of the type we’re often shown

Where the lazy ships sail on

Where they never have a care

Where the waves are lulling softly

Someday I’ll take you there

We can walk along the beach

Pick up a shell or two

I truly do not care

Long as I am there with you

©The Beginning At Last

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25 responses to “Paradise”

  1. Ernie 'Dawg' Avatar
    Ernie ‘Dawg’

    Sweet poem Kevin.

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you, E-Dawg! Much appreciation! 😎😎

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  2. byngnigel Avatar
    byngnigel

    Lovely. 👏👏

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Nigel. Most greatly appreciated 🙏🙏

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      1. byngnigel Avatar
        byngnigel

        You’re welcome. 🙏

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  3. Susan T. Braithwaite Avatar
    Susan T. Braithwaite

    That’s beautiful, Kevin. The cadence is perfect!

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Susan. One line is annoying me a bit, so I may fix it LOL

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      1. Susan T. Braithwaite Avatar
        Susan T. Braithwaite

        Nothing jumped out at me as I read. Whatever it is, get yourself near water and your brain will give you the solution. Never fails.

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      2. Kevin Avatar
        Kevin

        I ended up not changing it. Too lazy LOL!

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  4. marvellousnightmare Avatar
    marvellousnightmare

    Great poem, and wonderful pictures! 🙂

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed it! 😊

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  5. satyam rastogi Avatar
    satyam rastogi

    Beautiful post 🎸🎸

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  6. Laura Avatar
    Laura

    Well done Kevin 😊

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Laura. Quite glad you enjoyed it 😊😊

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  7. Pooja G Avatar
    Pooja G

    Love how the poem brought all three pictures together, really enjoyed it!

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Pooja! 😊😊 Glad you like it!

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      1. Pooja G Avatar
        Pooja G

        You’re very welcome! ☺️

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  8. Destiny Avatar
    Destiny

    so sweet… nicely done, Chief

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Lady Destiny 🙏🙏

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      1. Destiny Avatar
        Destiny

        pleasure always 🤍🙏

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  9. RasmaSandra Avatar
    RasmaSandra

    Beautiful and thanks for the memories of other beaches.

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much, Sandra. Most pleased you enjoyed it 😊

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  10. Spark of Inspiration Avatar
    Spark of Inspiration

    That’s a great poem for Valentine’s Day.

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    1. Kevin Avatar
      Kevin

      Thank you very much 😊😊

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