Primal

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To embrace the primal

Dead of night

To know excitement

Of the fight

To feel the fury

Deep within

To embrace the wild

Blood on skin

To feel the rush

Of bestial rage

To break the bondage

Of this cage

To roam the jungle

A slave to none

To live this life

A primal one

ยฉThe Beginning At Last


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18 responses to “Primal”

  1. This is how I feel when Iโ€™m free from work. Rawrrrrrr lol ๐Ÿคช
    Good job, Kevin ๐Ÿ˜Š

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    1. I do for the ride home. Then I quickly crash and burn lol
      Thank you ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. But at least at that moment we are freeeeee
        Haha and youโ€™re always welcome ๐Ÿค— I really liked this one
        Well, I like them alllll butโ€ฆyou know what I mean ๐Ÿ˜œ

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      2. Yes, the feeling of freedom is nice for sure.

        Yes, I know what you mean. Thank you ๐Ÿค—

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  2. Guess heโ€™s not wearing a tux tonight๐Ÿ˜‰

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    1. Casual Saturday ๐Ÿ˜„

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  3. That was really well written!

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    1. Thank you very much, Justin! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  4. Awesome poem and fits the picture to a T, well done.

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    1. Thank you, my brother. I felt the need for something with a bit of an edge. ๐Ÿ‘Š

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      1. Definitely raw and on the edge.

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    1. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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  5. Work and society… Too much of mediocre things. I can relate.

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    1. I think a lot of folks can unfortunately.
      Thank you Tash ๐Ÿ™

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  6. You are most welcome. Enjoy the wild side.

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  7. We cannot be a slave to anyone. No sir. Good poem, Kevin.

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    1. Thank you very much, Mary. Sometimes we feel the urge to break free. ๐Ÿฆ

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