One More Day

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A walk through valley

Shadows dark

Another life

Which missed the mark

In desolation

All alone

A crushing pain

Straight to the bone

An outcast true

A nomad’s life

The loneliness

Cuts like the knife

But in the distance

Shining light

A burning beacon

Dead of night

All an illusion?

Or hope at last?

You feel a spark

You’re walking fast

The light is moving

It’s far away

And so you walk

Just one more day

ยฉThe Beginning At Last


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18 responses to “One More Day”

  1. I liked this image especially and your wordsย 

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    1. Thank you very much, Cheryl. Deeply appreciated. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  2. Nicely penned and great imagery of a distant light. Reminded me of those nights when walking with a full moon shining above suddenly we’d notice that the moon seemed to be moving across the sky and often wondering if after turning the last bend that moon would once again be straight ahead.

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    1. It’s always fascinating to see those “movements” in the sky, is it not?
      Thank you, Sandra. Much appreciated. ๐Ÿ™

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  3. “Or hope at last?”…๐Ÿคž

    well expressed, Kevin ๐Ÿ™

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    1. Thank you very much, Destiny. It ended up somewhere I actually didn’t expect.

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      1. tends to happen… when we allow it.
        pleasure, Kevin .

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  4. I wrote something for this image last night lol ๐Ÿ˜† itโ€™s in draftsโ€ฆ.all 89 of em. Beautifully done as always, Kevin ๐Ÿ˜Š I think it inspires hope to keep going, even if it is one day at a time.

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    1. Thank you, Laura. In an ironic twist, It was fairly dark until I ended up on that for the last lines. lol

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  5. So good, Kevin.

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    1. Thank you very much, Mary. Very glad you enjoyed ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™

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  6. Oh, you know it.

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    1. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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  8. I like how you wrote this, it’s outstanding work! ๐ŸŒบ

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    1. Thank you, Kymber. I am very glad you enjoyed it. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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